Top bar text looked garbled Fixed (build (build ed94d0e4))
One clean panel, light text on the dark bar
Monday: two demo sites and one email
Text your notes to the “Fornax feedback” group. Screenshots with circles are perfect.
Today
- Look at “Your first notes” below: those four are fixed.
- Open Demo site 1 on your phone. Scroll top to bottom. Screenshot anything that looks off, circle it, and text it here.
- Do the same for Demo site 2.
- Check your Gmail for the sample email we would send that business. Does the subject, preview and sender make you want to open it?
- Tell us one thing you liked, too.
No need to say where you were: a screenshot of the spot is enough. If you see a small label (like S2) or a build code at the bottom, the screenshot already carries it.
Today's links
Demo site 1 (one-person business)link comes with the morning textDemo site 2 (crew business)link comes with the morning text
All links (same every day, always the newest version)
Demo site 1 (one-person business)link comes with the morning textDemo site 2 (crew business)link comes with the morning textDemo site 3 (one-person business)link comes with the morning textDemo site 4 (crew business)link comes with the morning textFornax website (test copy)tryfornax.commeetfornax.comClient dashboard (test copy)
Your first notes: before → after
“Plumbers / in Mesa” heading looked wonky Fixed (build (build ed94d0e4))
One heading at one size that wraps naturally
Intro should speak as the business Fixed (build (build ed94d0e4))
"We are {Business}, a {trade} company based in {city}. We fix {services} across {towns}." (Tyler: keep the name)
Phone, hours and “Serving…” repeated under the top Fixed (build (build ed94d0e4))
Block removed; phone stays in the header and call bar, hours and areas in contact and footer
Your notes
4 so far · 4 fixed
- F01Fixed (build (build ed94d0e4))
The text in the top bar looked garbled, like it was highlighted
- F02Fixed (build (build ed94d0e4))
The "Plumbers / in Mesa" heading looked wonky
- F03Fixed (build (build ed94d0e4))
The intro should speak as the business ("we")
- F04Fixed (build (build ed94d0e4))
Phone, hours and "Serving…" were repeated right under the top
The week
- Sunday: setup test
- Monday: two demo sites and one email
- Tuesday: the other two demos and the website
- Wednesday: a test purchase, then the dashboard
- Thursday: a short final look (by noon)